~Build me up~ *Danny fic* [Het;CH. New add: pg65]16.09.08 Message pg:71
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Sandra_McFLY


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~Build me up~ *Danny fic* [Het;CH. New add: pg65]16.09.08 Message pg:71

Build me up
Title: Build me up Rating: 12+ Pairing: Danny (and Charlie, haha) Point of view: Third person Summary: Charlie has left a troubled past behind herself she so badly wants to escape. What happens when someone she once cared deeply about suddenly moves in on the same street as her? Disclamier: I don’t own any of the McFly lads or the ladies in this story. But the plot is mine.
Author’s note: I dedicate this to all the lovely ladies I’v been so lucky to getting to know here on the boards; Maarit, Sophie, Suraya, Emma, Charlie, Amy, Sylvie, Lolly, Kay, Ivy etc. (sry if I forgot someone :S ). I love you all dearly and it’s a blast having you on here! Thanks for putting up with me.
Love or hate!
Sandra xXx
And how can I go on? Coz when I'm in the sun I see your shadow on the ground But you're never there When I turn around
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Library
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Chapter One (These are the days) page 1
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Chapter Two (Knowing me, knowing you?) page 3
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Chapter Three (Another year over, but things are still left the same) page 4
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Chapter Four (Make me, Break me) page 5
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Chapter Five (So, our paths finally meet again) page 6
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Chapter Six (Keep coming back) page 7
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Chapter Seven (I don't love you like I did yesterday) page 8
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Chapter Eight (Stubborn Soul) page 10
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Chapter Eleven (You tell me?) page 14
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Chapter Twelve (I think of yesterday) page 16
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Chapter Thirteen (Free souls, lost to the night) page 17
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Chapter Fourteen (You are my moon. You are my sun. You are my only one) page 18
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Chapter Fifteen (We are the lovers, I know you believe me) page 20
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Chapter Sixteen (The closer I get, the harder it gets) page 21
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Chapter Seventeen (These wounds won't seem to heal) page 22
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Chapter Eighteen (Black and White) page 28
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Chapter Nineteen (Standing by you) page 29
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Chapter Twenty (Upside down, boy you turn me) page 31
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Chapter Twenty One (Join the joyride) page 33
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Chapter Twenty Two (Miles away) page 34
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Chapter Twenty Three (Close... and very personal) page 35
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Chapter Twenty Four (A way to your heart) page 37
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Chapter Twenty Five (Meeting halfways?) page 38
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Chapter Twenty Six (To understand is to forgive) page 39
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Chapter Twenty Seven (Pregnancy, like it was yesterday) page 42
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Chapter Twenty Eight (A twisted turn never has a good ending) Page 44
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Chapter Twenty Nine (Loosing belief) Page 51
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Chapter Thirty (Wedding plans, burried memories and a chance or reunion?) Page 65
And how can I go on? Coz when I'm in the sun I see your shadow on the ground But you're never there When I turn around
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sweet_sophie


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Re: ~Build me up~ *New Danny fic by Sandra*
 Why don't you ride My side of the tracks
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Emmali


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I can´t wait reading this.
I bet it´s amazing, but everything you write is always amazing anyway.
Hugs
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Chapter One
These are the days
It is one of the most beautiful days of the year. The yellow sun is standing high on the blue sky, the birds had started the day off by singing early in the morning, tenderly waking the neighbourhood from its deep slumber by their lovely chirping sounds. Charlotte Hall was one of them whose got woken up like that this particular morning. Standing in her kitchen by the cooker, she’s enjoying the moment of preparing her lunch… it’d only get better once she gets to enjoy it out on her beloved veranda. The early summer had begun lurking people out from their houses, to spend most of their days out under the beaming summer sun. And for once, Charlie can fully relax as the holidays had just started the other day. Standing by the cooker stiring her soup in slowly yet firm motions, she hears a low knock on the front door. Wiping her wet hands off on a green small towel, she goes to open it and is greeted by her neighbour and good friend, Sophie. "Oh Charlie, I’m sorry to disturb you, but do I have some good news I wanna share with you” Sophie squeals and pushes past her friend through the doorway. ”How nice of you to…ehm, burst in like this Soph” Charlie follows the excited girl into the kitchen. ”Oh, you’re about to have lunch. This won’t take long though” Sophie says, jumping up on the tidy counter. ”You don’t have to rush. Why don’t you join me out on the veranda? There’s plenty of soup if you want some?” ”That would be lovely, thanks” Sophie smiles and takes a bowl from the cupboards. The two of them heads out to the veranda and takes a seat opposite each other. The veranda is Charlies favourite place during the summers, she’s spend so many summers on her granny’s during her younger years and ever since, she’d been determind to have one of her own in her future home. ”So, mind telling me what the latest scoop is?” Sophie looks up from her bowl of soup, her hazel eyes shining in excitement. ”Well… you know the house up on the street that was sold a few months ago? The one we made fun of saying the person who bought it probably had forgot he/she actually had bought it since no one ever moved inside?” ”Yeah.. ” ”Well” Sophie continues, stuffing one more spoon of soup in her mouth. ”The new owner finally ‘found’ it and he moved in earlier this morning” ”Wow finally! That was about time... wait a minute, did you say ‘he’ ?” Charlies eyes lits up. ”Yes!! And that’s why I’m so excited!! It’s certainly a he and he’s absolutely gorgeous Charlie!” Sophie says, jumping in her chair so her brown hair flies everywhere. Charlie can’t help but laugh at her friend’s behaviour. She looks like a big child recently having discovered Santa Claus. ”Haha, Soph… are you already drooling over the poor lad? How long has he been living here… 6 hours?” ”Well, you’re going to faint when you lay your eyes on him. He’s the neighbourhood’s new stud... definitely! I never saw a miss or mrs over at his place which makes him the perfect target” ”You’re stalking him? How low of you Sophie… that’s low” Charlie teases while Sophie’s shaking her head in protest. ”Whatever Charlotte, whatever! But I’ve got an idea.. thanks to Bree Van de Kamp” she laughs. ”Oh really? Let me hear this idea of yours?” ”Well, we have to make our new neighbour feel welcome to our ‘lovely’ neighbourhood right?.. so I thought you and I could go up there and give him a welcome gift” ”A welcome gift? What kind of thing did you have in mind?” ”Nothing fancy really, food or whatever. I don’t know… what do you give to new neighbours? Wait, I’ve got it… flowers!” ”Flowers Sophie?! Hello, we’re talking about a guy here… they will die after only a few days! They don’t know how to look after flowers. Why don’t we bring a cake and some chocolate?” Charlie suggests, putting her empty bowl on the table in front and leans back against the chair. ”Oh I see where you’re going with this, Bree all way through huh? Yeah, that sounds good. Ok” Sophie smirks, standing up. ”I run to the store and get some chocolate and you use your magic and make him a fabulous cake and I’ll see you later” ”What?! Wait! Why do I have to make the cake? That’s not fair Sophie! This was your idea” Charlie protests. ”Yeah, it was my idea to go and give him a welcome present, but it was your idea to give him a cake” Sophie points out, disappearing into the house leaving a speechless Charlie on the veranda. “Now, where did I put my cook book?”
And how can I go on? Coz when I'm in the sun I see your shadow on the ground But you're never there When I turn around
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Maasoo


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Eeee :P
Edit: well now at least I get the first comment spot (; *goes to read*
Edit2: Ahhhh that was fabolous Sandy! A new stud in the neighbourhood huh? Well wouldn't that be nice :P Sophie's excitement made me laugh hahaaa And Charlie baking a cake? Hmm..Even I don't know how to bake one so I hope she does!
Awesome start Sandra! Eee I'm excited and can't wait for more on this! At least something to cheer me up on this crappy day :P xxx
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Hahaha! You know me so well =p I'd totally be like that if some hotty turned up around here Not that they ever do but oh well!
Im loving the idea of bringing him a welcome gift Very Desperate Housewives =D Cant wait to find out who it is Xxx
 Why don't you ride My side of the tracks
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Emmali


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It´s a very promising start, I must say ^^
Sophie was a bit exited.
The part about that the person that had bought the house couldn´t find it was hillarious.
I can´t wait for the next add.
Hehehe poor Danny, he has no idea what´s coming for him *nods in Sophies direction*
Hugs
Edit: Wait (hehehe stoppa pressarna) it might not be Danny, but my guess is that it is him.
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Ahhh I love this already!
..and my Nan had a veranda that I always think of from when I was younger and me and my cousins used to play out there in the summer! It's so weird how much stuff you seem to just randomly get right about me. Our neighbourhood makes me laugh it kinda reminds me of a place that has no secrets.. And oh Sophie how I love you keeping an eye open when this mystery guy moved in up there.. He's hot too? Hmm, intrigued. I'm so glad that Sophie wants to go take him a gift, this should be interesting, I wonder if I'll like him too? Haha typical I get the job of making a cake! Whoo hooo as long as I get to eat the left over mixture off the spoon! Yay I'm so excited to see what happens when we go pay him a little visit!
Great start Sandy, Still just as amazing! x x x
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sandyyyy. thank you lots for the dedication love <33
ahh, what an amazing start! seriously i loved it! I love the banter between soph and charlie, poor charlie got stuck to bake the cake, wahheeyyy that ryhmes! though i don't mind baking the cake, as i love baking ahah. :DD
oohhh the new neighbor sounds mighty hot! i'd love to pay him a welcome visit too, wonder who this hot new neighbor might be? *coughs*danny*coughs*
ahaha, I love this fic already sandy, i can tell this will turn out to be another brilliant fic of yours! ily lots and lots! xxx
And your dear face; is touched with gold aimee<3
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Maasoo:
Eeee :P
Edit: well now at least I get the first comment spot (; *goes to read*
Edit2: Ahhhh that was fabolous Sandy! A new stud in the neighbourhood huh? Well wouldn't that be nice :P Sophie's excitement made me laugh hahaaa And Charlie baking a cake? Hmm..Even I don't know how to bake one so I hope she does!
Awesome start Sandra! Eee I'm excited and can't wait for more on this! At least something to cheer me up on this crappy day :P xxx
Woohooo! You got the first comment spot. Well done love! :D
*nods* yes yes, a new supposibly hot neighbour. That'd be awesome right? I definitely need one in my neighbourhood :/ Unfortunely I have to live among pensioners and families with younger children, boo! Sophie was very excited for this, poor Charlie though.. I wouldn't wanna be left doing the cake :S But I'm sure she'll make a great one :)
Thank you so much Mars Bars! I'm happy this turned out better then I thought. Ok, I made a few changes so this ain't nothing like I wrote in the beginning, cuz that was just hideous. Aw no, you had a crappy day? Hope you're feeling better today, and also by knowing another chap will be up later today :)
ly xXx
And how can I go on? Coz when I'm in the sun I see your shadow on the ground But you're never there When I turn around
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sweet_sophie:
Hahaha! You know me so well =p I'd totally be like that if some hotty turned up around here Not that they ever do but oh well!
Im loving the idea of bringing him a welcome gift Very Desperate Housewives =D Cant wait to find out who it is Xxx
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