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  • 07-07-2008 8:48 PM

    10 ways to break Tom Fletchers Heart [HET/CH] AWAAAARDS PAGE 45!

    Title: 10 ways to break Tom Fletcher’s Heart
    Rating:  
    12
    Pairing: Mainly Tom and Bethany
    Point of view:
    Third Person
    Summary: Val, a heartless journalist is a signed to make an article about the main singer of 'MCFLY'. She has to find ten ways to break his heart. But that isn't going to be easy; with his best friend, Bethany who is madly in love with him. And then she realises she loves him too.
    Disclaimer: We do not own any members of MCFLY or the girls that auditioned. However we own the storyline
    Author's notes:
    We hope you like it, comments make us dead happy :]
    And picture spammage ;] , please R&R

    Chapter Directory

    Introduction ~ Page one
    Part one~ Page One
    Part two~ Page two
    Part three ~ Page four
    Part four ~ Page Five
    Part five ~ Page Seven
    Part six ~ Page Eight
    Part seven ~ Page Nine
    Part eight ~ Page ten
    Part nine ~ Page twelve
    Part ten ~ Page thirteen
    Part eleven~ Page fourteen
    Part twelve~ Page eighteen
    Part thirteen ~ Page nineteen
    Part fourteen ~ Page twenty
    Part fifteen ~ Page twentyone
    Part sixteen ~ Page twenty two
    Part seventeen ~ Page twenty five
    Part eighteen ~ Page twenty six
    Part nineteen ~ Page twenty seven
    Part twenty ~ Page twentynine
    Part twentyone ~ Page thirty two
    Part twentytwo ~ Page thirty one
    Part twentythree ~ Page thirty three
    Part twentyfour ~ Page thirty four
    Part twentyfive ~ Page thirty five
    Part twentysix ~ Page thirty eight
    Part twentyseven ~ Page fourty 
    Part twentyeight ~ Page fourty one
    Part twentynine ~ Page fourty two
    Ending ~ Page fourty three 
     

    your smile;
    Bethany; I'll try not too.
  • 07-07-2008 8:49 PM In reply to

    Re: 10 ways to break Tom Fletchers Heart [HET/CH]

    Introduction
    The three boys waited nervously outside Fletch's office, Harry was fiddling with his drumsticks; drumming air drums. Dougie was chewing gum and fiddling with his ear stretcher; whilst Danny sat there trying to work out when he had his hair normally, it was curly. But when he pulled it, it went straight. "Morning guys, ehm, Do you want to come in?" Fletch said, as he opened the door, and signalled for them to go in. The boys walked in and sat down. "Lads... There's something you need to know; it's about Tom,"
    "Oh my god; he hasn't left the band has he!" Dougie said, in a shocked tone.
    "If he has I'll kill him!" Harry clenched his fists.
    "What?! Tom's left the band! Why did no one tell me?" Danny said, god he was stupid.
    "No... he hasn't left the band; but I'm afraid he's been in a car accident,"
    "He isn't..."
    "No, he isn't dead,"
    "Huh? Tom's dead... I thought he was leaving the band?" Danny said, he was such an idiot.

    "Danny, do you need me to spell it out for you? Tom is not leaving the band, but he has been in a car accident... I don't know how bad it is. That is all the hospital would tell me over the phone," Fletch said to the group.
    "OH MY GOD! TOM'S GOING TO DIEEE! TOM CAN'T DIE, HE CAN'T!" Danny screamed, running around.
    "Calm down!" Harry said, putting his hands on the boy’s shoulders.
    "I think I'm gonna be sick..."
    "PAPER BAG!" Fletch shoved one under Danny's mouth just in time.
    "Hold on, Does that mean Tom's gonna be getting bed baths by all them fit nurses?" they shrugged.
    "Lucky Tom," Dougie grinned with a wink.
    "Right, Dougie, Danny... c'mon let's go down to the hospital. We need to see if he's okay. I'll drive. Danny I think you should get another paper bag too,"
    "But is Tommy going to die?" He whimpered, like a three year old.
     

    "No, he isn't!" Harry sighed. Soon enough, they got to London City Hospital; they all scrambled out of the little mini, eager to see their best friend and band mate. Danny had been sick twice in the past 5 minutes... so they were glad to be out of the cramped, stinky place. Harry took charge, standing in front of a bored looking receptionist,
    “We’re here to see Tom Fletcher,”
    “And who are you?”
    “I am his brother and these are his cousins’,” He lied.

     


    your smile;
    Bethany; I'll try not too.
  • 07-07-2008 8:52 PM In reply to

    • McFly_D_
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    Re: 10 ways to break Tom Fletchers Heart [HET/CH]

    LOL.

    Danny needs to chill out. Poor Tom, I really hope he's okay. D:
    Why is it always Harry or Tom being the rational ones?
    Great add. More Soon?


  • 07-07-2008 8:54 PM In reply to

    Re: 10 ways to break Tom Fletchers Heart [HET/CH]

    Dougie may come through you never know ;]
    More when we can x x


    your smile;
    Bethany; I'll try not too.
  • 07-07-2008 10:08 PM In reply to

    Re: 10 ways to break Tom Fletchers Heart [HET/CH]

    Wo.

    So who wants part two?

    Cause I'm here & Iching to write

     

    xxx


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    Jess, Don't Get Jealous!
  • 07-07-2008 10:10 PM In reply to

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    Re: 10 ways to break Tom Fletchers Heart [HET/CH]

    *points to self*

    Danica wants part 2.:D


  • 07-07-2008 10:18 PM In reply to

    Re: 10 ways to break Tom Fletchers Heart [HET/CH]

    I will after I've had a massive bitch with my best friend

    ahaaa.

    funn <3 xD : )

    xx


    That Saves A Wretch Like
    Me

    Jess, Don't Get Jealous!
  • 07-07-2008 11:23 PM In reply to

    Re: 10 ways to break Tom Fletchers Heart [HET/CH]

    Part One

    The receptionist looked at them both, and evilled them, obviously not believing them.
    "Look, I know you're mcfly, and you're probably their manager; but I'll let you in because I'm nice like that" The receptionist replied.
    "Thank you so much" Harry replied, and the receptionist told them which floor Tom had been allocated on, and when they reached the room. He was not alone.

    There was a rather gorgeous nurse attending him; and it looked like Tom had fallen in love; again.
    "Whoa, she's fit!" Dougie whispered, going into a little daydream, whilst secrety staring at her arse.
    "Bethany's going to be pleased isn't she?" Harry murmered, and Fletch nodded; It was a well-known fact that Bethany was in love with her best friend, but didn't tell him for fear of losing their friendship, so instead, she ignored her feelings, and just remained the ever loving, ever patient Bethany; who always ended up picking up the pieces after each girl took Tom for a ride, and then broke his heart.
    Most of the girls that were with Tom were with him for the money; the fame; the sex?
    But not Bethany.
    Tom and Bethany had been friends since they were five, they had been through thick and thin together; which made their friendship even stronger.

    They entered the room, and stared at Tom, who had his leg up thigh-high in plaster, he grinned at him; his cute, famous rabbit teeth making an appearance.
    "How are you mate?" Danny asked, sitting down next to him, and holding his hand.
    Everyone stared at Danny; they all knew him to be a bit ditzy, but why would he do that?
    "Er, I'm fine thanks, Dan, why are you holding my hand?" Tom replied.
    "Why not!?" Danny replied, getting a bit offended.
    "Ehm, because it's weird; and gay." Tom replied, taking his hand away from Danny.
    "I can't help it! I"ve never been to hospital before; and thats what they do in the films!" Danny replied, going into a strop.
    "Okay Dan. I'm sorry." Tom replied.

    The conversation turned kind of awkward after that, people were struggling to come up with topics, so Fletch started talking about work.
    "Look, mate, I've just been in a serious car accident; I don't really want to talk about work!" Tom snapped, and Fletch shut up.
    The room was deadly quiet after that, and Tom looked at Harry.
    "Harry' He said.
    "Yeah mate?" Harry said, jumping up.
    "Can you call Bethany for me? I kind of miss her!" Tom chuckled, and Harry laughed.
    "Of course" Harry replied, leaving the room to call Bethany.

    Bethany was due to arrive at the next visiting hour; which was in two hours time, so the boys made their goodbyes and left. Tom got chatting to the nurse, and was soon laughing.

    Bethany arrived at the hospital a little after 4pm, she grabbed the magazines and chocolate out of her passenger seat, struggled to lock the car, and when she finally managed to find a hand to do it, she locked it. She ran inside, going straight for the ward that Harry had said that Tom was in.

    When she arrived at the ward; she searched each room until she saw him, she was about to walk in with some line like "Why couldn't you break your head?" when she noticed an attractive nurse sitting on his bed laughing and joking with Tom. She looked at Tom, and sighed. She had seen that look before, he was falling in love with the nurse! Trust him! He fell in love with everything with breasts and a pussy; apart from herself it seemed.

    She walked in, and stood at the back of the room, Tom noticed she was there, and his face lit up a little; not that it could have lit up anymore; the nurse seemed to have done that job. Bethany walked forward towards him, and gave him the magazines and chocolate.
    "Thank you! You didn't have to!" He smiled.
    "Oh, don't worry, the chocolates are from poundland." Bethany lied; not giving away that the chocolates were actually a thirty pound tray from thorntons.
    Tom laughed and she leant forward and gave him a hug.
    "Don't do that to me again" She whispered in his ear, and he squeezed her.
    She sat in the chair beside his bed, and the nurse wondered around the room, freshening up the flowers at the back of the room.

    "Who brought the flowers?" Bethany asked.
    "Danny' Tom smirked; and even Bethany found a smle coming onto her face.
    "You're joking me"
    "Nope, he just followed what happens in films" Tom laughed.
    "Aw, bless him! He's so sweet" Bethany giggled.
    Tom looked at her; and suddenly he realised.
    "You like him! Don't you!" Tom laughed.
    "No!" Bethany laughed.
    "You two should get it together!" Tom grinned.
    "No Tom!" Bethany replied.
    "Why not? You haven't been with anyone in so long, what it must have been since Drew! That was over five years ago now; not one date. What's going on with you?" Tom replied.
    "Enough about me, and more about you." Bethany smiled.
    And they got talking about Tom again.

    Soon enough, visiting times were over, and Bethany walked out after saying goodbye to Tom. She saw the nurse at the bottom of the ward.
    Bethany walked up to her, and smiled at her.
    "I just want to thank you for what you're doing for Tom; it means a lot" She smiled.
    "It's okay; it's my job." The nurse replied.
    "I'll deffinately compliment you to your manager; what's your name?" Bethany asked.
    "Val, my names Val, and thanks; but you know, it's just my job." Val replied, before walking further into the ward, leaving Bethany on her own.

     

    Day One

    Day one of finding out "10 ways to break Tom Fletcher's heart"; and so far I've found no way, except theres one girl.
    Bethany.
    She's obviously in love with him; and he doesn't have a clue, it's kind of funny actually!

    This is going to be more of an intresting cover story then I originally thought. Who thought that getting to know the lead singer of McFly, to be fun? It might be fun messing with him; after all, I won't have to see him again.

    Hopefully, my editor will be glad of this article; after all, it's my first one.

    I mean, I don't agree with what I'm doing, but it's my job; it's all I've ever dreamed of.

    And he's just a guy right? Nothing special.

    That's what I have to tell myself.

    Val


    That Saves A Wretch Like
    Me

    Jess, Don't Get Jealous!
  • 07-08-2008 4:38 AM In reply to

    Re: 10 ways to break Tom Fletchers Heart [HET/CH]

    wow, its great !

    more soon please

  • 07-08-2008 9:44 AM In reply to

    Re: 10 ways to break Tom Fletchers Heart [HET/CH]

    loving this so far!! cant wait for more!


    ^^ Click for my Writing ^^
  • 07-08-2008 7:32 PM In reply to

    Re: 10 ways to break Tom Fletchers Heart [HET/CH]

    bump


    That Saves A Wretch Like
    Me

    Jess, Don't Get Jealous!
  • 07-08-2008 7:44 PM In reply to

    Re: 10 ways to break Tom Fletchers Heart [HET/CH]

     loving this so far :)
     can't wait for more!


    so good you've got to abuse it.
    so fast that sometimes you lose it.

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  • 07-08-2008 7:51 PM In reply to

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    Re: 10 ways to break Tom Fletchers Heart [HET/CH]

    OOOOOOOOH!!!!
    VAL'S A B*TCH!

    Not the real Val obviously, I don't know her.

    But I'm not so fond of fic Val! :[

    Poor Tom...Poor Bethany. :[

    Depressing much?

    I liked it though. :D

    You're a great writer.


  • 07-08-2008 7:52 PM In reply to

    Re: 10 ways to break Tom Fletchers Heart [HET/CH]

    Lol.

    for everyone to know; Val is a lovely person in real life.

    A star : )hehe.

    Jess is currently brainstorming ideas for the next bit : )

    xx


    That Saves A Wretch Like
    Me

    Jess, Don't Get Jealous!
  • 07-08-2008 8:00 PM In reply to

    Re: 10 ways to break Tom Fletchers Heart [HET/CH]

    I am indeed! :]

    xx


    your smile;
    Bethany; I'll try not too.
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