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  • 07-13-2008 12:05 AM

    The Soul Is Just a Car (het, ch, add: page ten)

    Title:
    The Soul Is Just a Car
    Rating:
    15+
    Pairing:
    Dougie + ofc
    may be a mention of slash
    Point of view:
    Third person :)
    Summary:
    Dougie, a troubled youth, find himself with no choice left but to run.
    Disclaimer:
    From my head, don't own Mcfly, I own Cassie, I own the story.
    Dedication:
    My Sugar, cos she made the fic picture :D plus all my msn girls <3 and all my readers, especially those who voted for this, i hope you enjoy it.
    Authors note:
    It's not going to be a long fic. It deals with serious issues.

    Chapter Directory:
    Prologue - Page one
    Chapter one - http://mcfly.forums.umusic.co.uk/t/31266.aspx?PageIndex=2 
    Chapter two - http://mcfly.forums.umusic.co.uk/p/31266/1023224.aspx#1023224
    Chapter three - http://mcfly.forums.umusic.co.uk/p/31266/1067518.aspx#1067518
    Chapter four - http://mcfly.forums.umusic.co.uk/t/31266.aspx?PageIndex=8
    Chapter five - http://mcfly.forums.umusic.co.uk/t/31266.aspx?PageIndex=10

     

    cos i cant dance for shit
    and he's got two left feet


    my fiction, innit ;)
  • 07-13-2008 12:05 AM In reply to

    Re: The Soul Is Just a Car (het,ch)

    And if life is just a highway, then the soul is just a car
    And objects in the rear view mirror may appear closer than they are

     

    Prologue:

    "He's only gone and done it again"

    "Who?" Cassie breathed, dreading the worst.

    "Who do you think?"

    "He can't have, he promised..."

    "His promises mean fuck all to be honest" Harry growled, "I swear, if someone doesn't give that boy a smack I'll..."

    "No you won't" The light blonde haired girl whispered, "Harry, you won't"

    "Stay away from him"

    "I will I promise, if you promise to do the same."

    "Whatever" Harry sighed, "hopefully someone else will sort him out."

    "What he do anyway?" Cassie asked, anxious but curious all the same.

    "Stole a car, crashed it. A girl was with him, she's quite badly hurt." He looked down at her and smiled a little, "lucky it wasn't you eh?"

    She faked a smile back, but it satisfied Harry as he walked through the back gate that led to his garden. She hesitated looking out of the alleyway, at the empty road, wondering just how lonely the figure of her past was right now. It ached, more then she cared to admit, to think of how much pain he must be in.

    But, life goes on.

     

    Short, but purposeful
    the do get ALOT longer
    comments? :)

    cos i cant dance for shit
    and he's got two left feet


    my fiction, innit ;)
  • 07-13-2008 12:08 AM In reply to

    Re: The Soul Is Just a Car (het,ch)

    okay firstly, lets have a little spazz shall we?
    ;ljglkdgjlkfgldfkghdklsgjspirtukfs adlkjfhslkajfklasjfkldjfa

    NEW CHAZ FIC EXCITES ME LIKE A THREESOME WITH HER AND DOUGIE DOES!
    <3

    also, i'm fucking hooked alreadly.
    fifteen lines and im ready to beg you for more already.
    your clearly amazing.

    Stole a car, crashed it. A girl was with him, she's quite badly hurt
    that happened to my friend you know...
    she was in a car with some bloke and he crashed the car and left her.
    but yeah im assuming its mr poynter whos done this?
    ohhhh godddddd.
    it doesnt sound good.

    MORE CHAZ.
    NOW MORE PLEASE!

    i love you like a fat kid loves cake
    xxxxxxxxxxxxx


    i wanna hold you....

    new thread :)
  • 07-13-2008 12:14 AM In reply to

    Re: The Soul Is Just a Car (het,ch)

     awesome start,

    can't wait for more 

    :)

    xxNiaxx


    Perfection<3
  • 07-13-2008 12:16 AM In reply to

    • MOONY
    • Not Ranked
    • Joined on 09-12-2007
    • Not a newbie!
    • Posts 97

    Re: The Soul Is Just a Car (het,ch)

    Eeeeek
    New chaz ficcc!!
    OMG
    i love it already....i need more!
    haha wow obsessed already.
    Again?! wow he makes a habit of it?
    wants to know the slash pairing Confused
    whos harry to dougie? and cassie to dougie? cassie to harry? answers chaz i need answers!
    Great start lovie..can't wait for more
    Lurbe you xxxx
    you know how much cos you've got me reading a straight fic Stick out tongue


    Tom kissed Harry and he liked it...
    The taste of his apple lipgloss
  • 07-13-2008 12:30 AM In reply to

    Re: The Soul Is Just a Car (het,ch)

    can you tell im bored?


    i wanna hold you....

    new thread :)
  • 07-13-2008 11:57 AM In reply to

    • Angie.
    • Top 50 Contributor
    • Joined on 09-12-2007
    • The Con Artist.
    • Posts 3,616

    Re: The Soul Is Just a Car (het,ch)

    IM OFFENDEDDD.
    You didn't tell me you was gonna do it right away!
    I thought like, yeah she'll read it through... maybe post it tomorrow...nahh...
    AND THEN YOU GO AND POST THE VERY SECOND I GO OFFLINE.
    Hmpffff.

    *sulks for a bit*
    *goes to read anyways*


    Oooh.
    Dougieee, you sound like the definition of troubles.
    And and and who's Cassieee (everytime I read that name I think Cassie from Skins, lollll)? And grrr at Harry.
    Not that I have any particular reason to be angry at him, I just am, as per usual. It's like with Lor in Why.
    ConfusedStick out tongue

    Eeeeesh.
    Sugar way likes thissss.
    *nods*
    And that graphic.
    *chuffed*

    ILOVEYOUCOOKIE.
    *licks*
    Stick out tongue

    Angie**


    2nd august, 2008 <3.
    dreams do come true, you know.
  • 07-13-2008 12:52 PM In reply to

    • Gemma_22
    • Not Ranked
    • Joined on 05-22-2008
    • Brisbane, Australia
    • Posts 63

    Re: The Soul Is Just a Car (het,ch)

    ooooh this sounds really good Smile

    cant wait for more!!

    Gemma xox

  • 07-13-2008 3:02 PM In reply to

    Re: The Soul Is Just a Car (het,ch)

    imma gona read this in a bit when everyone stops fannying around m

  • 07-13-2008 3:38 PM In reply to

    • Hollyy;
    • Not Ranked
    • Joined on 10-01-2007
    • The Land of Sheep
    • Posts 92

    Re: The Soul Is Just a Car (het,ch)

    my thing still exsists!
    go me!
    cassie is my sisters nameeee
    8-) Woooo

    Im confused and its cool
    does this mean why is finished..?
    i cant like, i dunno
    IM SOOOO BEHIND
    *sigh*
    go meee 8-)
    I dont get what het means lmao
    Does it mean like a reptile or something?
    it sounds reptilish dont it?
    god knows though

    Its a lovleyy start chazzy pies.
    I dont have a clue what happened but GO YOUU!

    iloveyou
    :D
    xx


  • 07-13-2008 6:40 PM In reply to

    Re: The Soul Is Just a Car (het,ch)

    Chaz you have a new fiction up
    I wanted this one to Big Smile
    I will have to read to make up for my lake of Why
    Plus I am intrigued already and want to find out more
    xx


    And then you shot across my sky like a meteor.
  • 07-13-2008 10:34 PM In reply to

    Re: The Soul Is Just a Car (het,ch)

    PADFOOT:

    okay firstly, lets have a little spazz shall we?
    ;ljglkdgjlkfgldfkghdklsgjspirtukfs adlkjfhslkajfklasjfkldjfa

     

    NEW CHAZ FIC EXCITES ME LIKE A THREESOME WITH HER AND DOUGIE DOES!
    <3

    also, i'm fucking hooked alreadly.
    fifteen lines and im ready to beg you for more already.
    your clearly amazing.

    Stole a car, crashed it. A girl was with him, she's quite badly hurt
    that happened to my friend you know...
    she was in a car with some bloke and he crashed the car and left her.
    but yeah im assuming its mr poynter whos done this?
    ohhhh godddddd.
    it doesnt sound good.

    MORE CHAZ.
    NOW MORE PLEASE!

    i love you like a fat kid loves cake
    xxxxxxxxxxxxx

     

    :') i love you

    like a three with dougie? :') thats the nicest thing anyone has ever said
    and we shall do that one day
    because are his sluts <3

    :') im glad

    really?
    jeeez :/
    its not good
    maybe maybee
    =P

    more now!

    i love you too :')

    xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

    cos i cant dance for shit
    and he's got two left feet


    my fiction, innit ;)
  • 07-13-2008 10:35 PM In reply to

    Re: The Soul Is Just a Car (het,ch)

    Party_Princess:

     awesome start,

    can't wait for more 

    :)

    xxNiaxx

    thank you!!

    more now

    xx

    cos i cant dance for shit
    and he's got two left feet


    my fiction, innit ;)
  • 07-13-2008 10:37 PM In reply to

    Re: The Soul Is Just a Car (het,ch)

    MOONY:

    Eeeeek
    New chaz ficcc!!
    OMG
    i love it already....i need more!
    haha wow obsessed already.
    Again?! wow he makes a habit of it?
    wants to know the slash pairing Confused
    whos harry to dougie? and cassie to dougie? cassie to harry? answers chaz i need answers!
    Great start lovie..can't wait for more
    Lurbe you xxxx
    you know how much cos you've got me reading a straight fic Stick out tongue

    *chuffed* indeed it is
    eee thank you!
    you better keep with this one Confused
    =P
    you have no college work, you have no excuse
    =P
    hes always in trouble, yes =P
    OBSESSED WITH SLASH MUCH?
    =P
    i gotta stop doing =P Confused
    answers will come in good time muwahaha

    i lurbe you lotssssss

    cos i cant dance for shit
    and he's got two left feet


    my fiction, innit ;)
  • 07-13-2008 10:38 PM In reply to

    Re: The Soul Is Just a Car (het,ch)

    PADFOOT:

    can you tell im bored?

     

    I LOVE YOUUUUUUU

    cos i cant dance for shit
    and he's got two left feet


    my fiction, innit ;)
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