"My Heart's Anatomy" new danny fic!!!
Last post 10-11-2008 4:54 PM by abby1102. 84 replies.
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annagal
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"My Heart's Anatomy" new danny fic!!!
Title: My Heart's Anatomy
Author: you guessed it!! ME! (annagal)
Rating: probably 15
Genre: Drama/Romance (Mainly about Danny)
Disclaimer: I do not own McFly.
Author's Note: The story changes points of veiw some times, mostly Lanna's POV but make sure you look before reading it. haha it could get a bit confusing if you dont!
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annagal
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Re: "My Heart's Anatomy" new danny fic!!!
Hey everyone. This is obviously chapter ONE!!! yay! i promise the story will get into more with Danny as the story progresses. Just tell me how you like the first chapter so far!!!
Chapter One Monday morning—8:10 amLanna’s POV
“Why won’t you come?” Kenely whined in one of her most annoying tones.
I was already ten minutes late for my first class and could not handle another one of Kenely’s tantrums right now. The last time I overslept I missed half my Anatomy class and ended up getting a D on the test. It was as if we learned 10,000 different things in just 10 minutes of class. I rushed around our crowded but cozy apartment with only one goal, to find my left shoe. As I continued in my search for my shoe I could feel another 400 unlearned topics slipping away from my brain. I needed to get to class and one yellow paten leather flat was holding me up. It should be like a light in a dark room, or in my case a bold yellow shoe in a mostly beige apartment. As I scanned our little apartment it was no where to be found. Rushing around, looking under everything, basically being a wild bore through a campsite, I started getting frustrated. I had always thought that me and Kenely should keep our apartment tidier but it was only in moments like these where I actually meant it. Just before I was about to cave and go to class barefoot I saw a glimpse of yellow peeking out from under a pillow of all places. I snatched up the shoe, grabbed my books, looked at the clock, groaned, and ran out the door.
Reaching my car I flopped on the seat and sped out of the parking lot. Just what I expected there was traffic. I didn’t mind traffic as much as some people though. To me traffic was a time where I was forced to relax because there was nothing I could do to control it. But today I was too stressed, and too late to enjoy just thinking. Then again traffic always came in times where you were late to begin with; I guessed that was its nature just like running late was my nature. Kenely once told me that the clock inside my head was just a little off, of course that was after I was an hour late picking her up! As my thoughts travelled from one to another, my phone rang loudly with its slow melody. I had always thought you can tell a lot from someone’s ring tone, it is the one song they choose to play every time someone calls. This was why I hated when people had the generic ring, boring. I glanced down at the caller id, still half watching the road, and noticed it was Kenely. I burst of a guilty emotion ran over me. I felt bad for rushing out on her like that totally ignoring our conversation. I quickly answered my phone in a cheerful tone hoping to hear a similar tone back.
“Hey Lanna” replied Kenely in a tone in which I knew something was bothering her. “you know you always do that, just totally—“
“I’m sorry Ken,” I interrupted knowing where she was going, “its just that I have so much on my mind. I really didn’t mean to run out on you like that”. It was an honest reply. My mind was clouded with all of my emotions. I was stressed from the tough week of finals coming up. I was upset because things were on the rocks with Todd, my boyfriend for three months. “And you know this week is when I go to visit my dad” I added hoping she would buy any lame excuse I gave.
“I know Lanna, and I'm sorry. I haven’t been the best friend lately because I know you have been really stressed!” Kenely said looking for my forgiveness. One of Kenely’s best qualities was that she can never hold a grudge or even pretend to be mad at someone for too long, in this case about 30 seconds. “And that’s another reason for you to come with me Wednesday! You can get your mind off of everything. Pleeease Come!”
“Ahhh, I already told you Ken that I just don’t want to tag along on your date!”
Ever since last Friday night Kenely had been bugging me to go on a double date with her. She came back Friday night from the pub the happiest I had ever seen her, almost drunk but still incredibly happy. She talked for hours about this incredible musician, bassist to be exact, named Dave… or was it Denis?… no Dougie… ya Dougie, who had asked her on a date Wednesday night. Kenely however did not have the best dating record. She knew how to get the guy to ask her out, or she said, “luring them in”, but somehow on the first date she would push them away. Everyone always joked with her about not being able to keep a guy for more than 3 weeks. Although she usually just laughed along with everyone, I could tell that she really liked her new boyfriend Dougie and didn’t want to screw this one up. In truth, she was nervous and thought if I were there I could take some of the pressure off. Also, everything worked out perfectly for her because Dougie had told her he already had plans with his friend and band mate Danny, so a double date would work out flawlessly.
I tried every excuse in the books. I tried telling Kenely that I had to study that night but she knew I did not have a class Thursday. I told her that I couldn’t go on a date because I was still dating Todd which she told me was not a viable reason because he was a jerk and I should break up with him anyways (Kenely never really liked Todd, and to tell the truth, right now I didn’t like him all that much either). Kenely always made a good case in her arguments. She knew with enough convincing she could get me to do anything.
As I drove closer to the school, now twenty five minutes late for class, I new I would have to snag an incredible street parking spot and run into school. As I prepared my decent from my car, I could still hear Kenely on the phone begging “Pleeease Lanna, I need you there. I will screw it up if you aren’t there! Please come, it will be fun. I will love you forever if you come, well I will love you forever even if you don’t come but please come, plee—“
“Okay fine, whatever I will come! I have to go! Bye!” I caved into her pleading, half because I needed to go and wrap this conversation up, and half because I actually thought a night out would be just what I needed right now. I could still hear her screaming “thank you” and “I love you” as I hung up my phone, shoved it into my bag and left for my class, not knowing what I had gotten myself into but surprisingly excited for Wednesday. ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
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moyo547
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Re: "My Heart's Anatomy" new danny fic!!!
hey anna! first of all, HAPPY BRTHDAY! :)
also, this is quite good. if you're super bored, hey, post another chapter! i'd definitely like to see what's going on here on this double date!
Summertime made promises
It knew it couldn't keep
The fairytale was climbing up
A mountain far too steep
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annagal
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Re: "My Heart's Anatomy" new danny fic!!! Chapter two added
Here is chapter 2, it may be terrible but better will me coming (aka Danny)!!!
Let me know how you like it!!
Chapter Two
Monday afternoon —2:13 pm Lanna’s POV
“Two fifty please,” I searched my wallet for the money and placed it on the dingy black counter. I looked up at the man behind the counter as he counted my money. He was a tall man with broad shoulders. I couldn’t help but think how he had the right build to be a football player, and he seemed so misplaced standing behind a coffee stand in the middle of campus. My thoughts were interrupted as I saw my caramel frappicino with an extra shot of espresso being walked over towards me. It was placed in my hand and like an impulse I took a large sip. As I took a sip I could feel the cool liquid go down my throat and just a moment later could feel the invigorating caffeine rush to every inch of my body. It was the perfect cure for the tired mind of a 20-year-old med school student who had just sat through two torture sessions, Human Anatomy and Advanced Calculus.
Feeling a large pressure lifted from my brain, I started walking to my car, casually sipping my coffee drink.
“Lanna! Wait up Lanna!” I faintly heard from a distance in a man’s voice.
I didn’t bother turning around to see who could be calling for me. Right now I was definitely not in the mood for dealing with some college jerk who would try to hit on me while still being slightly drunk from the night before. I kept walking to my car, increasing the pace of my strides a little more.
“Lanna!” I heard again as the voice obviously new I was trying to avoid it. “Hey Lanna wait up!” for the first time the voice sounded familiar. I forced my head to face the voice. It was Todd.
“Oh hi Todd,” I said with little enthusiasm. “What are you doing here; I thought you didn’t have a class ‘till four.”
“Ya I know but I just thought we could go out to lunch or something, you don’t have a class next, do you?” said the tall, broad sholdered, blond haired man.
“No, I am out of classes for the rest of the day.” still making my way to my car not bothering to turn and face him.
Todd looked at me like I was insane not to be jumping at a chance to hang out with him, “Okay… great… I am kind of in the mood for Mexican food.” His large arm muscels flexed as he grabed my arm stoping me in my tracks and making me turn to face him.
I turned reluctantly almost rolling my eyes “It’s just I can’t go out to lunch today, I really have to go back and lock myself in my apartment and study, I have a big test tomorrow,” which was a flat out lie, i just did not want to go to lunch now and expeccially not with Todd. (Before judging me for totally avoiding this seemingly nice man, let us finish the conversation)
“Are you ******* kidding me, you won’t go out to lunch ‘cuz you have to study! That’s ******** and you know it!” Todd snapped back as he stormed off to who knows where to go and sulk in his own self pity.
And that was how most of our conversations ended. Now I am getting ahead of myself, I will start from the beginning… I met Todd at a New Year’s Eve party. I was first attracted to his smile, a seemingly genuine smile causing two dimples to form on his cheeks. His good looks were hypnotizing. He was six foot and one inch, had a very strong build, had dark brown eyes, and short hair blonde in color. As we talked through out that night, I was impressed with his confidence. When he asked for my number that night I was so happy. And when he called to ask me on our first date, I was just as just as happy. It wasn’t until our third date where I realized Todd was not all he was cracked up to be. Todd was the popular football player and prom king during high school. I assumed he had received his cockiness and arrogance from being the heart throb and golden boy during high school, and I understood it. He was not used to people turning him down. Todd had a short temper. He would let little things get to him and then when they built up he would explode in a violent outburst. So far while knowing Todd had taken his anger out by breaking three dinner plates, kicking trash barrels, and once even punching the refrigerator. The more I spent time with Todd, the more he acted like a foulmouthed, over jealous, self-centered jerk who needed an anger management program.
Maybe I am making Todd seem like the bad guy. He was generally a nice guy, he just wasn’t right for me. I needed someone I could talk to and would listen, not someone who would just buy me things when I was upset. After about three weeks I knew that Todd would never grow out of his immature stage. I knew I should break up with him, do what is best for me, I just didn’t know how he would react. Even though he never was violent towards me, I was scared of him. If he reacted so bad for me not going to lunch with him then I could only imagine how the break up would go. In conclusion I decided to avoid him until he got bored and broke up with me. I’d act heartbroken and his ego wouldn’t get bruised.
Just thinking about our screwed up relationship was enough to put me in a bad mood. I reached my car and began driving to my apartment complex. I became so overwhelmed after a few minutes of thinking about everything on my mind; I knew I had to vent it all out. I reached for my phone and called up Kenely to warn her of my upcoming arrival. As I was almost to my street it started to rain. The rain fell so abruptly and so heavy with each rain drop hitting the windshield harder and harder.
Forcing one leg in front of the other, holding my breath and then releasing it slowly, squinting to shield my eyes from the huge pellets of rain, I walked from my small silver car, entered my apartment building and started up the long narrow hallway leading to my apartment. I knew as I unlocked the familiar door, and entered I would find a cup of hot tea, a bar of Hershey’s dark chocolate, and the most important, moral support from someone that knew me best. As I neared my blue door my hand searched my large tote pushing away books, and finally feeling a small piece of metal. I pulled out the key and entered.
My eyes passed right over Kenely who was by the door waiting for me and I eyed my soft bed. All I wanted to do at that moment was drown in the sea of blankets and pillows.
“Lanna! Hey sweetie come in and sit tell me what happened!” I forced my mouth to smile for about ten seconds then allowed it to go back to the way it wanted to be. As I threw down my books and collapsed my body onto my narrow bed, arms and legs sprawled, I started venting all about my day.
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annagal
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Re: "My Heart's Anatomy" new danny fic!!!
why did i need your proof when i knew the truth?
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annagal
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Re: "My Heart's Anatomy" new danny fic!!!
why did i need your proof when i knew the truth?
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annagal
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Re: "My Heart's Anatomy" new danny fic!!!
thanks!!
and i just posted chapter two!!
i am glad you like it, it will be interesting to see how this double date goes??!!
why did i need your proof when i knew the truth?
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annagal
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Re: "My Heart's Anatomy" new danny fic!!! chapter 3
Chapter Three Tuesday morning—3:55am
Danny’s POV
There were only few people out this early, heading off to their highly important jobs, running with their briefcases and purses over their heads to the safety and dryness of their car. It was raining hard. I was wet, half from sweat and half from the rain. I had just got home from a gig and was so pumped up; I decided to let some of my extra energy off by running. Of course it was raining. I loved running in the rain. It was so much more cleansing and refreshing to run in the rain. It kept me cool even though in truth I was sweating and my face was red from pushing my lungs so hard. I had already ran four miles, but couldn’t stop going further. I was definitely not a runner but something about this morning was so enjoyable. With few people out I could run through the streets and not worry about being recognized. Listening to my iPod I ran to the beat of my new favorite up-tempo song.
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Tuesday morning—3:55am
Lanna’s POV
Rain. Tired. Puddle. Sweat. Wet. Car. Sunrise. Keep Running. Thoughts swarming through my head but I was so tired and out of breath they just swarmed none of them could be placed, none stuck. I couldn’t believe I was doing this to myself. Running and it wasn’t even four o’clock. I ran with a steady pace, jumping over a few puddles here and there, avoiding a parked car in the middle of my path. My feet were pounding against the ground but my heart was pounding harder. I was so wet. The rain had been so hard I could feel it hit my skin with a little punch every droplet. The rain started to let up a slight bit but I was sure it wouldn’t last long. Watching the sunrise as I ran towards it, knowing that I would never reach it, yet striving for it. I became closer and closer to the corner of my street knowing that I was close to home, able to go and take a nice cool shower. I needed a shower. I had mud sprayed all up the back of my tank top, shorts, and legs. I mistakenly ran through the park causing the puddles of mud to be splattered on my back with each stride. I didn’t even know how bad I smelt but it didn’t matter, I knew it was bad. There is no way that deodorant could mask my smell after running for an hour. The rain also gave me the false illusion that I was sweating more than I probably was. My shoulder-length blonde hair flapped up and down half out of its low ponytail. My shoes wet from the puddles swished with each step added to the natural soundtrack of my feet pounding against the ground. So close to the corner, I ran, eyes closed, letting the rain hit my face
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Tuesday morning—4:02am
Danny’s POV
As I kept running I started to feel the toll of this long voyage on my body. My legs began to feel weak, and my lungs felt like they were on fire. I eyed the up coming corner of the street, I made up my mind to stop there for a break, drink some water, and hopefully be able to breathe again. I forced my legs to continue until I reached the corner. Panting heavily, my head down and my hands on my knees slouched over, iPod blaring.
Bang! What the Hell! I looked over my shoulder to see what had just hit me. It was a girl. She was sitting down, probably falling from the impact, with her knees up to her chest. Blonde hair was covering her face, but as I bent down to eye level with her, I could see her beautiful green eyes glancing up at me from beneath her hair. She looked like she was as surprised as I was. She slowly lifted her body up from the sidewalk and with my arm under her’s she stood up, smoothing out her shirt and pushing her hair behind her ear. “Are you okay, Miss?”
“Oh ya I am fine, just a little surprised. I um … I am so sorry I ran into you… I mean it was just the corner… I didn’t know you were there… and ya… I am sorry.” She spoke nervously, a tone of pink covered her cheeks as she blushed, and she was smiling, a nervous smile people gave in awkward situations. I couldn’t help though as she spoke notice how fit she looked. She was panting heavily and was wet from the rain. Her skin glistened from the water. She was tall, had long tan legs, a bright smile, bright eyes.
“Oh don’t worry about it. It was my fault, really.” As I said this she slowly started backing away giving me one last smile, nervously brushed her hair back behind her ear and then jogged down the street. I stood at the corner watching her as she ran, she ran with speed, but undoubtedly the most grace and beauty. I hadn’t wanted her to go. Something about her intrigued me and I hadn’t even known her name. I continued running back to my flat; the pain of running seemed to evaporate and was the last thing on my mind.
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Tuesday morning—4:10am
Lanna’s POV
I finished up my run by sprinting up the stairs to our fifth floor apartment. My heart was pounding in my chest. I was breathing even heavier. I headed right to the shower. When I came out a half an hour later, bathrobe on, and towel wrapped around my hair, I could hear Kenely’s alarm blaring. Kenely was the heaviest sleeper. Usually she would sleep right through her alarm and I, hearing it from the next room over and waking up to it, would have to go wake her up. I took on the job of waking Kenely up again today. I jumped on her, shaking her violently, until suddenly I saw one eye open, then two.
“Ken, get up!” I talked firmly and in a loud voice. She replied with a groan and then a “No, I am going back to sleep!”
“Today is your early class Kenely, you gutta get up now.”
After about 15 minutes of this, she got up and jumped in the shower. I got dressed and started making coffee. Once Kenely had a shower and coffee I could finally tell her about my encounter running. I sat on the couch with my coffee, the news on the tv, thinking about what happened. I still felt so embarrassed. All of a sudden I just ran into a guy! Normally talking to a man that gorgeous would have had me nervous, but completely embarrassing myself right before talking to him, ya, I was horrified. I sat, drinking my coffee, smiling about my encounter earlier this morning. There was something about him I was attracted to, and I realized it. It was not the curly brown hair, perfect smile, intense blue eyes, but the way he helped me up and made sure I was okay. He cared, something Todd had never done.
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star girl in training
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Re: "My Heart's Anatomy" new danny fic!!! chapter 3
aww thats so sweet of danny to make sure she was ok and lanna was silly to just leave
hehe lol i want more xx
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DannysRatGirl
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hey sweetie.
sorry it's taken me such a long time to comment, i've had a busy weekend.
but what a great start to the story :)
bless Danny for helping her up and making sure she was okay.
such a gentleman.
there was definately a spark there.
i wonder if it's the same Danny that will be at the double date?
can't wait to see what happens next :)
xxx
 everyday should be a new day, to help you smile and find a new way of falling in love. <3
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abby1102
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Re: "My Heart's Anatomy" new danny fic!!! chapter 3
Yayy! Sorry that it took so long for me to read this Anna, but its really good! Keep it up!
But I'm still waiting
for the world to hear my song
So they can tell me I was wrong
But they weren't there beneath your stare
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annagal
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Re: "My Heart's Anatomy" new danny fic!!! chapter 4 added
Hey everyone! Here is chapter four and it hopefully wont have too many errors, i will edit it later!!
Thanks for reading, and remeber to r and r!
Chapter Four
Wednesday night—7:40pm
Lanna’s POV
“Red or blue?” Kenely said holding up two different dresses.
I glanced over slightly tearing my eyes away from my textbook. “Red”
“Are you sure, I kind of like the blue one?” holding both dresses up to her body, looking in the mirror.
“Ya, the red one.” She finally was convinced and threw the blue one on her bed, went to the bathroom and came out minutes later wearing the red dress. Her long dark brown hair was in perfect waves; her blue eyes sparkled as she smiled, “How do I look?”
“Dougie will be all over you!” I said smiling peering over my black rimed reading glasses
Laughing, she gave me a few of her cheesy modeling poses.
“Now, what should you wear”, she glanced at me still in my sweats. As she disappeared into my room, I could hear her raiding my closet. “We should take a before and after picture!” she called from my room.
“Hey, I don’t look that bad right now!” I laughed I headed to the bathroom. I looked in the mirror and realized i did look pretty bad. My hair was in a wet messy bun, my baggy basketball teeshirt. I gave my self a one eighty degree makeover. I blow dried my hair, still wet from my shower, put on some mascara, blush, and perfume.
“Here you go” Kenely came in holding one of my dresses. I put it on and came out to find Kenely half way done with a lean cuisine meal.
“Yours is in the microwave” she told me.
“Aren’t we going out to dinner, why are you eating?”
“I always eat before going on a date. You never know what kind of food they will have there”
I smiled, I never understood Kenely’s mind.
“And, I don’t want my date to have to pay for a huge meal of mine, this way I can just get a salad.” She said with a goofy smile, still her mouth full of her panini.
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Wednesday night—8:20pm
Lanna’s POV
We finally left the apartment and got to the restaurant about 20 minutes late, which actually wasn’t bad for us. The restaurant was much fancier than what I had imagined. I felt underdressed but I was impressed. Dougie must have some good taste for picking out such a nice restaurant, I thought. Kenely searched around looking for Dougie and she must have seen him because she started walking away from me.
She greeted Dougie with a warm smile and hug.
“Dougie this is my friend Lanna, Lanna this is Dougie” the generic introduction took place. Dougie was really cute and all I kept thinking was ‘good going Kenely’. After a while I asked where Dougie’s friend was. I began to get worried that I would have to hang with the new couple all by myself.
“Oh he is just in the bathroom, dont worry he didnt ditch” Dougie said
I was releived that I would have someone else to talk to durring the night because it already started feeling awkward. Kenely and Dougie were all over each other, flirting, acting like an anoying couple. “I am going to get a drink” I said spotting the open bar in the corner, “do you two want anything?”
“No I am all set” Dougie answered
“Me too” Kenely said then turned back towards Dougie laughing at another one of his jokes
Ahhh! I knew I shouldn’t have come on this double date! I rolled my eyes and walked to the bar. I got my drink and sat at the bar; waiting to return to the happy couple until someone named Danny would come out and join us.
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Wednesday night—8:30pm
Danny’s POV
I came out of the bathroom, and curved my path back to Dougie by going past the bar. It had been a long day and i needed a drink. I saw Dougie standing with a woman who I assumed was Kenely, still waiting for a seat. Wow! Kenely’s friend didn’t show! Great! Dougie, his n | | | |