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  • 08-18-2008 7:48 PM

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    Ownership (het, ch, add; page 30)



    Title: Ownership
    Author: Me (Le chat)
    Rating: 15
    Rating reason: Violence, strong language and all that, sadistic nature
    Pairing: Dougie/OFC
    Point of view: First
    Summary:
    Disclaimer: I do not own McFly, this is a work of imagination and nothing else.
    I do however own Sian and Jas. Fact.
    Dedications:First of all; Bella. She planted the seed that came to grow to this, so it's all thanks to her.
    To Martin who said that the prologue was fab.
    And to Sian who encouraged me to post it.
    To all those who auditioned, and who read and replies.
    Love ya xx


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  • 08-18-2008 7:49 PM In reply to

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    Re: Ownership {het, ch}

    Chapter Index;
    Prologue - Page One
    Chapter One - Page Two
    Chapter Two - Page Four
    Chapter Three - Page Six
    Chapter Four - Page Eight
    Chapter Five - Page Nine
    Chapter Six - Page Eleven
    Chapter Seven - Page Twelve
    Chapter Eight - Page Fourteen
    Chapter Nine - Page Sixteen
    Chapter Ten - Page Eighteen
    Chapter Eleven - Page Twenty
    Chapter Twelve - Page Twenty Three
    Chapter Thirteen - Page Twenty Four
    Chapter Fourteen - Page Twenty Eight
    Chapter Fifteen - Page Thirty


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  • 08-18-2008 8:24 PM In reply to

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    Re: Ownership {het, ch}

    The graphic looks scary!

    But I bet this fic isn´t just a walk in the park.

    I can´t wait for this to start, I´m so excited.

    Hugs

  • 08-18-2008 10:10 PM In reply to

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     HOLY CRAP.
    *is scared at fic graphic.

    Shoot, this looks scary. :o Yet oddly intriguing at the same time. (;
    Can't wait until this thing starts! askdf;a


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  • 08-19-2008 12:06 AM In reply to

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    Re: Ownership {het, ch}

    haha, hey guys
    thanks for stopping by.
    I was supposed to post the prologue, but I had to run for the bus.
    so I didn't have time
    but i'll post it now
    xxkim

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  • 08-19-2008 12:09 AM In reply to

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    Re: Ownership {het, ch}

    Eryngium:
    haha, hey guys
    thanks for stopping buy.
    I was supposed to post the prologue, but I had to run for the bus.
    so I didn't have time
    but i'll post it now
    xxkim

    Yay!! I can´t wait!

  • 08-19-2008 12:10 AM In reply to

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    Re: Ownership {het, ch}

    Prologue
    There was horror in my voice as I screamed loudly, my voice bouncing between the walls as a thousand copies of myself screaming with me. I ran, I don’t think I’ve ever pressed my body to this limit before, normally I wouldn’t have pushed this hard but I was in panic and it was the adrenaline running now. I just had to get away from whoever was chasing me through the dark alleys with the shadows as protection. If it was dogs or men, or men with dogs, I wasn’t sure, but I knew that if I could just take myself to the harbor I would be safe, I wouldn’t have to run ever again. Just a little bit more.
        The piece of paper in my hand, that god forsaken piece of paper that had ruined it all, burned against my fingers. This wasn’t supposed to happen; if everything had worked out as we had planned I wouldn’t be here right now, running for my life. I felt like throwing it away and let the wind catch it, to get rid of the burning that spread through the palm of my hand, but I knew that if I did so, someone could find this. Someone who shouldn’t. I snorted through my panting as I made a hasty right turn. As if it wasn’t too late already.
        Suddenly I saw a small light coming from what supposedly was a lantern and I knew I was there. Just a few more breathings now, just a few more steps, and then I would be safe together with my rightful family and we’d be on our way to a nicer, better place. Just a few more now. I couldn’t even hear the things behind me anymore, they had since long faded into the background. I focused my sight on the lantern which grew bigger by the second, and all my energy went straight to my legs to make them able to run and to escape. I was going to make it.
        And then I fell.

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  • 08-19-2008 12:15 AM In reply to

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    Re: Ownership {het, ch}

    ahh, I don´t know what to say, I´m speachless.

    This can´t be good, something tells me that her life is going to change now, for the worse.

    I loved it.

    can´t wait for the first chapter, I can tell that this fic is going to be epic!

    Well I´m off to bed, night, night. 

    Hugs

  • 08-19-2008 12:19 AM In reply to

    Re: Ownership {het, ch}

    She... fell?
    OH NO. T-T
    Hurry and stand before they get youuuu~

    Crazy prologue. Got me hooked.
    ;o Keep writing!

    xxx


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  • 08-19-2008 1:11 AM In reply to

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    Re: Ownership {het, ch}

    She's sooo not going to make it!
    hahaha.
    I wonder what's on the peice of paper?
    I need to know Kim.
    pooost more
    :D

    I have a funny feeling this is going to be brilliant.

    xx



    Never let this go.



  • 08-19-2008 4:23 AM In reply to

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    Re: Ownership {het, ch}

    She is sooo not going to make it, hope she does.
    What's in the paper? MORE
    :]

    xxxx

  • 08-19-2008 8:01 PM In reply to

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    ZOMG
    I hope she makes it....
    What's on the piece of paper though?
    Why are they chasing her?
    What on earth is going on???
    Hahhaa, I love this already.
    I would like answers to all my questions quite soon, please.
    Big Smile
    Moore?

  • 08-19-2008 8:20 PM In reply to

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    Emmali:

    ahh, I don´t know what to say, I´m speachless.

    This can´t be good, something tells me that her life is going to change now, for the worse.

    I loved it.

    can´t wait for the first chapter, I can tell that this fic is going to be epic!

    Well I´m off to bed, night, night. 

    Hugs

    haha, you sadist!
    xD
    okay not really, but almost.
    i'm glad you liked it ;D
    more up tomorrow
    xxkim

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  • 08-19-2008 8:21 PM In reply to

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    Re: Ownership {het, ch}

    iishmeeh:

    She... fell?
    OH NO. T-T
    Hurry and stand before they get youuuu~

    Crazy prologue. Got me hooked.
    ;o Keep writing!

    xxx

    She did.
    it's a bit cliché for characters to fall when they're close, but it creates a tension.
    taha
    glad you liked it dessa
    xxkim

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  • 08-19-2008 8:23 PM In reply to

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    Re: Ownership {het, ch}

    £Lou:

    She's sooo not going to make it!
    hahaha.
    I wonder what's on the peice of paper?
    I need to know Kim.
    pooost more
    :D

    I have a funny feeling this is going to be brilliant.

    xx

    and here we have lou the optimist.
    ;)
    but you're right. they never make it.

    taha.
    i have a funny feeling that you'll like it.
    this fiction is my baby.
    xxkim

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