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Just for a Moment (het, ch.26, p.26)

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  • 10-29-2009 10:57 PM

    Just for a Moment (het, ch.26, p.26)

                                                   
     

    Title: So Quiet You Were
    Rating: 15 Unless there's a warning.
    Pairing: OFC/ Danny/ Tom
    Point of view: First Person. Miriam/ Myra/ Myr unless stated otherwise
    Summary: Her life changed on New Years. She was a lonely, neglected child with no Father and had no company aside from her Mother who wouldn't even care if she died. So she made a wish, it was a simple wish she made, to have someone for herself. And as the fates work their magic, he appears before her can you say crappy summary?
    Disclaimer: Title of the Fic is the same as the song by Go Crash Audio. And obviously, I don't own the McFly boys... 
    Author’s notes: Please Read and review. I really don't care if you give me any criticism as long as it's constructive... and enjoy! :)

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  • 10-29-2009 10:58 PM In reply to

    Re: So Quiet You Were (het, ch. prologue, p.1)

    Chapter Directory.

    Prologue- "Lonely". Page one. 

    Chapter one- "Names". Page three.

    Chapter two-"Good Company". Page four.

    Chapter three-"A Stranger". Page five.

    Chapter four-"New tutor". Page six.

    Chapter five-"Awake". Page six

    Chapter six-"Late Night Visitor". Page seven.

    Chapter seven-"Bad News". Page eight.

    Chapter eight-"Guitars". Page eight.

    Chapter nine-"Reflect". Page nine.

    Chapter ten-"Fainting Spells". Page ten.

    Chapter eleven-"Dreams". Page eleven.

    Side story. Page eleven.

    Chapter twelve-"Gossip". Page twelve.

    Chapter thirteen-"Sing". Page thirteen.

    Chapter fourteen-"Stay". Page fourteen.

    Chapter fifteen-"Always Smiling". Page fifteen.

    Chapter sixteen-"World Outside". Page sixteen.

    Chapter seventeen-"Not Here". Page seventeen.

    Chapter eighteen-"What I Want". Page eighteen.

    Chapter nineteen-"For Staying". Page nineteen.

    Chapter twenty-"New Family". Page twenty.

    Side story. Page twenty.

    Chapter twenty one-"Stop Crying". Page twenty one.

    Chapter twenty two-"Leave". Page twenty two.

    Chapter twenty three-"Dinner Guest". Page twenty three.

    Chapter twenty four-"New Friend". Page twenty four. 

    Chapter twenty five-"Let Down". Page twenty five.

    Chapter twenty six-"A Sign". Page twenty six.

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  • 10-29-2009 10:59 PM In reply to

    Re: So Quiet You Were (het, ch. prologue, p.1)

    Yay Dami, I'm here to be an annoying little boardie :D
    Buuuut you love me, so it's okay.



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  • 10-29-2009 10:59 PM In reply to

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     Oh hai thar nat.

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  • 10-29-2009 11:02 PM In reply to

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    Prologue.                                                                                       Lonely.

     

    The first night he came to me was on New Year’s.

    10…

    I didn’t bother with the countdown. I could hear everyone downstairs, their laughing and cheer. The clock next to me told me that it was nearly midnight. But I didn’t bother, “Big Ben” was visible outside… that is if you went out to the end of the road and looked up, not through the window. Of course, I could still hear the loud clock.

    Looking out the window from my room, you could see the streets lit up. Even at this hour, but that’s to be expected on New Years, it was the one day of the year where you could play loud music and run amuck on the streets at this time and not have the neighbor’s call the cops on you.

    9…

    I sat in my room, the lights out because I liked the dark. I turned away from the window and pulled down the blinds so that no light entered the room. All was quiet, save the sound from the party downstairs. Mum always loved extravagant parties and New Years was just another excuse for a party.

    That must be why they say I take after Father. Mother liked flashy things, and Father was more reserved, simple and quiet… like me. I never did understand why Father and Mother married, maybe because my father admired mother’s bashful, outgoing attitude, or maybe it was how pretty she was, but whatever the reason, it wasn’t enough to keep the two together. Father had left Mother and me with her. I never understood that, Father was like me, Mother was more outgoing, so shouldn’t it have been mother to leave father and me?   

    8…

    Nevertheless, what was done was done. I was stuck with mother, a women who was the polar opposite of me, who-though I didn’t particularly dislike or despise- was the reason why my life was the way it was. She didn’t want her daughter, a plain, simple girl (like her father) to be seen in public as her daughter, no, that would be embarrassing.

    So I sat here, on my bed, listening to the sounds from below and wondering if I might grow up to be like Mother. Would her way of life not eventually influence me to be like her? I wondered this… and I wondered if anything would be different if father was here. Would he have calmed mother down? Would my life be filled with less of Mother’s parties? Would he look after me better than mother does? Would he love me?

    7…

    I pushed the thoughts from my head as I knew I wouldn’t be able to come up with answers. Instead, my mind drifted back to reality. Not the reality that I was up here and there was a party downstairs, but to the reality that I was lonely.

    6…

    Very lonely.

    5…

    I had realized this fact only the week before and it never really bothered me till now. Till now, I was shy, quiet, and didn’t care much for anything around me. I was in a “broken” family with no father and all that… so… that maybe it. Maybe it was the lack of a male figure in my life while my mother surrounded herself in the attention and company of men. You can call her a whore, or a slut, it bothers me not, but there really wasn’t anyone in my life… that paid any attention to me.

    4…

    Mother partied, and kept herself in the company of men.

    I had no father.

    Who was there for me to turn to?

    3…

    It wasn’t always like this. There was one time that I didn’t feel alone but that was too long ago, almost too long for me to remember. I mulled over this thought and felt the aching in my chest. I was lonely, very lonely, and I didn’t mean that I was lonely as I was now, sitting alone. I was lonely in life because there was no one there for me.

    2…

    I began to weep and the happiness and laughter that I heard from downstairs made me feel even lonelier. All those downstairs had someone for themselves, someone to care and love them and I had no one.

    1…

    “I… I want someone for myself,” I whispered to myself, but I couldn’t even hear my own words, for the clock tower outside this house… “Big Ben” had begun to chime. I counted it, and it stopped at twelve. It was midnight. It was New Years.

    And… it was then that he first appeared to me.

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  • 10-29-2009 11:03 PM In reply to

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     AND I MANAGE TO GET THE PROLOGUE IN MODS. WTF?

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  • 10-29-2009 11:04 PM In reply to

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    Hai thar!
    Look what I found under my bed!
    I found McFly!



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  • 10-29-2009 11:05 PM In reply to

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    And Danny in my fridge! Imagine that :o



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  • 10-29-2009 11:07 PM In reply to

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     Oh nathalie. :')

    I knew there was a reason why I lubbed you, and it wasn't just cause I lubbed you. <3

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  • 10-29-2009 11:09 PM In reply to

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    This thread is so gonna get raped.
    I'm sorry xD



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  • 10-29-2009 11:13 PM In reply to

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     *rolls eyes*

    Oh damn.

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  • 10-29-2009 11:15 PM In reply to

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    I told you I was sorry!!!



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  • 10-29-2009 11:20 PM In reply to

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     yeah yeah. lol, we should stop before we reach page two!

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  • 10-29-2009 11:22 PM In reply to

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    What if I want to reach page 2?!



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  • 10-29-2009 11:22 PM In reply to

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    Hi everybody!! -waves frantically-

    Lemme guess, & you found Tom under your rug?
    (hense why he's still wearing it)

    Well, I got this guitar and I learned how to make it talk.
    -- Bruce Springsteen, Thunder Road
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